Transition

I am going to write a story about a girl who has just moved from a very small town, where there is barely any people, to a huge city. Her parents are too caught up in there own lives to worry about her. They don't notice that she's changing or barely ever comes home; she's starting to hang out with the wrong people and make the wrong choices. Then one day she gets in a horrible accident; drugs and alcohol are involved.... No one ever would have thought that Brandy, the perfect girl in her old town, would ever be into that kind of stuff. Finally her parents eyes are opened and they start to pay attention to her.